When you write an an Opinion
Opinion
When you write
composition,,
composition
you should avoid repetitions
you should
avoid repetitions and
and
useuse
more varied vocabulary..
more varied vocabulary
1. Read this example of an Opinion
1. Read this example of an Opinion
composition.
composition.
are
also
In my opinion, television in my country is generally very bad.
bad.
There are many reasons for this. First of all, the programmes
of bad quality. TV companies just want to make as much money
as possible, so they make cheap programmes, like quiz shows
and music programmes. Even when they show a goodgood
programme, they keep interrupting it with advertisements. I
hate it when they interrupt a goodgood football or basketball match
to show advertisements for soap powder. Moreover, there is too
much violence on television, which has a badbad influence on
viewers, especially young people. They often show scenes of
violence just to get goodgood audience ratings. Finally, another
I think is very bad are talk programmes; people who talk for
hours are very bad. I think the only way things will improve is if
government makes the TV companies cut down the number of
advertisements. They could also encourage them to show more
goodgood programmes.
thing
2. As you see the student uses the
words goodgood and badbad far too
often.
Replace these words with
alternative ones: interesting, poor,
interesting, poor,
exciting, low, dull, boring, high,
exciting, low, dull, boring, high,
negative, original, well-made,
negative, original, well-made,
imaginative, irritating.
imaginative, irritating.
There are also too many of the
programme and show.
show.
words programme
Are there any other variants?
Are there any other variants?
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